Cyborg Wars: Reboot (Page Two)

5/3/12: Added basic color to bottom half.
5/4/12: Finished basic color. Added cobblestone, mostly.
5/9/12: Finished!


Yes yes, I finally finished the second page of the comic. In all truth, it just took me forever to finish the second half of it.... which.... doesn't make taking so long.... sound ... any better....

But yay it's finished! I hate that you can tell the two halves were drawn separately. I was unable to change the first halve's sky colour as well.... But oh well!

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Hey, tell me. Is the text a bit too hard to read? I made the text in panel 10 and 11 trail off on purpose, if that wasn't obvious.

I'm hoping to make more of the comic soon, so I'd appreciate some criticism here and there.
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Page one: [link]

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*EDIT*
Site is back up! Here: [link]
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